***
“Hello” I answered the telephone on the forth ring.
Silence.
“Hello?” I repeated again. Still silence on the other line. Exasperated, I said “Who ever you are, you need to improve on your conversation skills. Either that or you’re dumb”. I almost hung up when I heard a soft chuckle.
“So you are not dumb”, I retorted, waiting.
Then a familiar male voice said, “Sara. It has been a long time”. I stood rotted to where I was standing, clutching the receiver tightly. I could feel the blood draining out from me. My head dizzy. Calm down, Sara. Take slow deep breath, I told myself repeatedly. Inhaling and exhaling the air.
“Are you still there, Sara?” he asked skeptically.
“Sara? Are you alright?” he worriedly asked, hearing the heavy breathing on the other end.
“Hello” I answered the telephone on the forth ring.
Silence.
“Hello?” I repeated again. Still silence on the other line. Exasperated, I said “Who ever you are, you need to improve on your conversation skills. Either that or you’re dumb”. I almost hung up when I heard a soft chuckle.
“So you are not dumb”, I retorted, waiting.
Then a familiar male voice said, “Sara. It has been a long time”. I stood rotted to where I was standing, clutching the receiver tightly. I could feel the blood draining out from me. My head dizzy. Calm down, Sara. Take slow deep breath, I told myself repeatedly. Inhaling and exhaling the air.
“Are you still there, Sara?” he asked skeptically.
“Sara? Are you alright?” he worriedly asked, hearing the heavy breathing on the other end.
“Hmmm…” I could only mumble as acknowledgement. My mind was still numb for the shock of hearing his achingly, familiar voice. Swallowing hard, I managed to say the words out of my constricted throat. “How did you get my number? I am unlisted”.
He paused for longest time when he finally replied, “Your father gave it to me”. Too shock to ask him where he met my father; I could only gaped open-mouth at his answer. Recovering, I admonished. “Why would my father do such a thing? You’re lying!”
“Believe it, Sara”.
“But why he does something like this?”
“Maybe he thinks you and I can have another chance at being together”, he answered matter of fact.
“In your dreams!” I retorted angrily at him, feeling betrayed by my father’s loyalty and through this man’s confident response that we could have another chance.
“Always” he replied softly.
***
So, what do you think of this prologue? I am currently writing this story, but I have yet to finish it. I have intention of finishing it up, but I am not sure when it will be completed. You do know how tough it is to write sometimes. Other days, the idea just come pouring, or I can go dry and empty for days. I will try my best to finish it.
I titled it "A Second Chance".
Nope, this work of mine not for publishing but just for my reading pleasure and of course to you who is interested to read your friend's humble writing.
I am way, way from being a professional author, but a quick question--Anyone wants to be my editor? :) Oh, and let me know what you think of it okay?

12 Comments:
I definitely enjoyed it. I got a little mad when it ended, as I wanted to read more...
Good stuff.
1:25 AM
Thank you Anonymous! Glad you enjoy it!!! Thanks for visiting my blog.
BTW, do you have a name? Don't be shy about it.
1:46 AM
WOW!! Already fall in love with tat story dialogue of yours.. can't wait to read further of de story.. :D
Nywy, thks for your comment on my "Migraine". Appreciate ur concern. Insya Allah, will manage thru. Till then, take care. Hope to see u some time soon.. Ciao!
1:51 AM
Hey Az! Glad to see you here! Yes, take care and insya allah, you'll be okay. We'll be okay. I have been quite dysfunctional too lately.
Thanks for the encouragement! :)
1:58 AM
Ro, um the white letters are quite straining to my eyes...love the new blog look though. Blue letters are the best!
6:36 AM
Roey- I likey! :) More please!!!
6:58 PM
Ro, why does that story seem so familiar!!!
LOOL! I think it's not a work of fiction but rather based from experience, right?
LOOL! That was great btw. Keep up the good work.
2:51 AM
Jan, I'd changed the font for you. :)
T, back off! When am I ever going to read a piece of your story, huh? You have NO REASON not to finish it esp not when Jose already bought you that software. ;)
Sharon, Sharon, Sharon...sometimes you scare me to my early grave my dear! It's like you can read my mind too well. Did Gine send you a voodoo doll so that you can read my mind easily? LOL. The story is perhaps based on experience but it's fiction all the same.
3:56 AM
Ro, thanks for changing the font. That was so sweet. I hadn't realized I left that comment on this entry and I never even commented on the entry itself. LOL
I'm hooked. I'm with Sharon...is this based on a true story????? ;) That thought immediately came to my mind even before I read the comments...hmmm. I wonder if it will have a happy ending. I wonder if the happy ending will parallel the true story. Oooooh, hurry up and write the story.
8:12 AM
I'll try to squeeze in as much as possible in my story. I am like halfway through the story already, but you know I kept on changing the plots until I don't know which one i like best! LOL
Happy ending? I don't know..Not telling you all! *zipping lips*
5:54 PM
ROHAYA!!!!!
You better write the story fast! You know I can't stand to read an unfinshed story right? Please..please write more. I want to know what's going to happen next. LOL!
9:38 PM
WELL!!! I NEVER!!! LOL Why is it I am being nice and people YELL at me? You, Jen everyone! I LIKED it and I was told to back off... I quit! No more from me, I am as silent as the grave from now on! Oh and you have seen nothing because there is nothing to see. I am starting to think though I dream of being a writer, writing does not dream of me! :)
12:19 PM
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